Usually words come to me when I am busy doing something else but just happen to have a pen or a pencil in my hand and a notebook in front of me.
The same is true for this one that I am about to share with you. Before the poem was complete, I did not know what to call it, but with the last line of the last stanza came the title of my poem.
A simple, short poem encompassing the age-old tale of innocent love tainted by the society- “Zalim Samaajh”. The ‘cat licking the cream’ is indeed how sweet love starts and before you know it, it ends all too soon with just an aftertaste and an empty bowl ( empty heart and hands, in the case of humans) to remain.
Exactly! And then no one cares why a heart stopped beating.
Very well composed. This short poem tells the reality of love. How it started and how it gets ended leaving behind a dead heart. Sigh!
True that. Love of any kind.
Beautiful! You always write so well ❤
Thank you so much Zainab 🙂
The last stanza is just too perfect
Perfectly heartbreaking, you mean?
Wow. The sweetness of cake eventually takes the cat to new journey, full of enthralling experiences. Super sweet lines.
Thank you so much Shoaib
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when and how did u started writing??
I honestly do not remember. I’ve been writing in my earliest memories of myself.